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【IELTS writing task2】出来はともかくテンプレ通りに攻略してみる。その4

IELTS終わった後だけど、writing task 2の練習してた問題が他にもあったので晒しておきます。赤字はテンプレートから。

 

IELTS 10 test 3 writing task 2

 

解答 

Nowadays, citizens are able to purchase the same products anywhere in the world through development of countries. Therefore, people in the general public have positive or negative views about the development which generates much similar countries.

 

Although there are good arguments in favor of negative opinions about it, I personally believe that it is absolutely positive development.

 

The first point to consider is the fact that why people may buy same products across the world. This is simply what products which are ordered a lot of people has quite good function compared with others. If you desire something, you can get it as a result of development of countries. For instance, according to the recent research conducted by one of the prestigious university in Japan, current Japanese life style is at least over 70% similar with American life style. In my opinion, we accept this life style positively and should share good products, good facilities and even good cultures.

 

On the other hand, there is no doubt that some people have negative statement with the perception presented previously. They think if countries become more and more similar, countries lose each good feature. In an interview with famous social scientist, he points out that countries' features will be lost near future and then people must put only one government on the world, like earth empire. Nevertheless, I believe that people must be smart well enough to achieving countries' development without lost those good features.

 

In conclusion, I would like to emphasise that countries which are becoming more and more similar is positive development and this phenomenon is just one intermediate of developments.

 

 

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