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【IELTS writing task1】出来はともかくテンプレ通りに攻略してみる。その2

IELTS wrinting task 1 その2

 

設問

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

 

解答

 

This ber chart illustrates what UK graduates and postgraduates who did not get full-time job did after leaving college in 2008.

 

This survey distincts four categories about career of graduates and postgraduates; Part-time work, Voluntary wark, Futher study and Unempoyment. The ratio of both chart looks almost same except part-time job.

 

The number of graduates is about ten times much than postgraduates. Most of both graduates and postgraduates continue to study. Actually, 29,665 of graduates and 2,725 of postgraduates chose further study for their next career.The second rank of career of graduates and postgraduates is part-time work, followed by unemployment and voluntary work. For instance, 17,735 of graduates and 2,535 of postgraduates went into part-time job. Then, 16,235 of graduates and 1,625 of postgraduates is unemployment whether they are happy or unhappy. Finally, the lowest rank of their next career is obviously voluntary work that the sum of graduates and postgraduates is less than 4,000.

 

 

あー難しい、とりあえず書いたらボディ二つに別れなかったっていう。文字数は155語。書くのに40分くらいかかってしまった、やべー。練習したら20分で書けるようになるんかな。